Letter to Anastasia Steele

Dear Ana,
      You've been through a lot, we know. In the span of less than two weeks time you have found an insanely attractive, wealthy boyfriend (more or less), lost your virginity, graduated, got a new apartment, met your boyfriends family and vice versa, got a new lap top, cell phone and car, been introduced to the world of S&M, broke up with your new boyfriend AND got a new job straight out of college.

Damn girl you are struggling. 

I don't mean to sound like hater Ana but maybe you're being a little too sensitive? Or is the two week relationship between you and Christian that serious? I'm not demeaning the beat down you received from wonder boy either, that was a bit over the abusive line and you had every right to be angry - but you did ask for it.

Sincerely,
      A soon to be college grad, with no job offerings, a shitty cell phone, a shitty car and no boyfriend. (...I'll admit I have a pretty nice laptop)

Book One was addictive. Could not put down. But, as much as a I loved reading it, the relationship seemed too immature for Ana to become so upset over, this goes for Christian as well.

Regardless, book two has been started, and my comments and opinions will not cease. I only hope for a matured relationship between Christian and Ana, along with a more developed Ana. Christian seems so interesting to readers and while his character unfolds and renders personal secrets, Ana seems a tad bland. Also, the dialogue between the two could improve; I feel like I'm reading the same sentences over and over - but is that what people in relationships do, repeat the same things? Not so sure.

Anyway! Onto Fifty Shades Darker, oOo sounds..... - dark?